Nobody Knows (Alternate Version)

Recently the Songwriting Podcast critiqued my song "Nobody Knows".
Based on their assessment and words of advice, I adjusted the song.
If you want to listen to the original, look at the right side bar and click "Nobody Knows" underneath the cdbaby album box.
Tell me what you think.

If you want to check out the Songwriting Podcast, click the link http://songwritingpodcast.com/
You can download or listen to any episode from that link.
If you want to listen to the episode in which my song "Nobody Knows" was critiqued,
download or play episode 15.

Thanks and be sure and tell me what you think of the variation of "Nobody Knows".

Blessings,

Kevin